Reading Comprehension – 1 (SNAP/NMAT)

David pushed harder. The timber gate groaned, and then budged. He slipped into the field and pocketed the key. Cliffs beamed in the morning light over pines climbing the hill. Somewhere at the cliff base would be the lost cave. David followed the rock wall until it met the corner of the barn. Its red tile roof and grey stones displayed their centuries. He entered, leaving the door open for light, and creaked open the sole window’s shutters. Mustiness of grain and animals ran strong. Amazing, he thought, that Dad owned this property for years without our knowledge.

When David arrived yesterday in the village of Marcilhac he had searched out the leasing sheepherder, Raphael. He told David that his father also passed away recently and acknowledged that his family always felt blessed by the arrangement. His herds grazed both on his own plateau land above the cliffs as well as on this rich leased valley plot.

David had been raised as much French as American in his home state, Oregon. Dad and Mom often spoke their native language and taught it to their children. They told of the land that time forgot, the Célé valley where they had grown up, hidden in the plateau descending from central France’s GrandMassif. David was born there only months before his parents left after the war for the United States. He often wished his parents had physically introduced him to their roots, but they never returned. He had wanted to explore the medieval villages, meet local craftsmen, walk fields bordering the river, hike trails that climb to the plateau, talk to sheepherders, visit the grotto Pech Merle and view firsthand Europe’s oldest artwork, murals scratched and burnt onto walls 25,000 years ago.

David’s course had included Oregon State University, marriage, Willamette Valley farming, and raising a family. Mom had died unexpectedly when he was in his thirties. Even when their youngest daughter left home five years ago, France still seemed unreachable to David and his wife, Francine. Nor had his siblings made the voyage… always too much responsibility, too little money and time. Now finally in France at age sixty, he still felt unable to be a tourist.

Only three weeks earlier Dad had handed him a map and the key with his dying wish. He told David of this family property. Then he described its cave with prehistoric art, its lost opening now covered with scree. His eyes misted as he pleaded David’s promise to pursue his dream and legacy. It seemed long ago, but only three weeks had passed since Dad’s death and David’s pledge. He still felt like he was spinning in a free fall.

EngQuizzitive – 1.48 (grammar):answers

Topic : diction error (using the inappropriate word)

Answers :

  1. The army squad found an alive child under the rubble.[Incorrect : Explanation : Adjectives are generally used before a noun or after a linking verb (eg, be, look, seem etc). However, some
    adjectives like afraid, alike, alive, alone, asleep, awake,content, ill, sorry, sure, upset, well etc. are not used beforea noun. It is incorrect to say, ‘ill people’, ‘asleep man’ or ‘alive child’. The correct sentence would be : The army squad found an child that was alive under the rubble.]
  2. She is quiet capable of finishing the work within a week.[Incorrect : Explanation : quiet and quite are homophones ; quiet means silence and is inappropriate here and has to be replaced by quite which means enough.The correct sentence is : She is quite capable of finishing the work within a week.]
  3. They decided to part as they thought that any farther discussion on the issue would be pointless.[Incorrect : Explanation : further and farther are homophones;farther is used to indicate distance and further means in addition to.The correct sentence is : They decided to part as they thought that any further discussion on the issue would be pointless]
  4. She likes all the pets,specially dogs.[Incorrect : Explanation : We use ‘specially’ to emphasize that something is done for a specific person or a particular reason. (Ex) This dress is
    specially designed for the queen. When we mean ‘above all’ we use ‘especially’. In the given context it is more apt to use ‘especially’, in place of ‘specially.’The correct sentence is : She likes all the pets,especially dogs]
  5. She has very few chance of passing the exam.[Incorrect : Explanation : chance is an uncountable noun hence the adjective few cannot be used in the above sentence.It has to be replaced by little .The correct sentence is : She has very little chance of passing the exam.]